Saturday, November 22, 2014

WeWriWa

It's time for another WeWriWa! Today, we are doing 8 sentences from The Cop.


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This post is part of an ongoing blog hop hosted by Weekend Writing Warriors. Every Sunday, participating authors post eight sentences from a published work or even a WIP (work in progress). Then we hop to our fellow warriors’ blogs and check out all the fabulous fiction that’s happening! It's a great way to meet readers, writers, and your next favorite book!  :)

Today's WeWriWa comes from The Cop, Donna's story in the Loving Her series.

Background on this snippet: Donna was jolted awake in the middle of the night by a distress call from Katie. At Katie's request, Donna and two male officers went to a seedy motel. Donna was just let into a room that's occupied by a middle-aged couple, and she's beginning to snoop around.


“Wow. For just two people you sure did pack a lot. Any particular reason why?”


She glared at the couple who sat speechless just a few feet away.

Donna continued to investigate, but she was beginning to doubt Katie’s distress call. As she made her way through the dingy room, she came upon a closed door. Light was shining through the bottom crack of the doorway.

Slowly, she placed her hand on the knob and opened it.



Hope you liked it! Happy reading!  :)

5 comments:

Chelle Cordero said...

What a terrific build-up! I wonder what is on the other side of the door...
Great snippet.

Charmaine Gordon said...

So well written, Lauren. And scary. You've set the scene for an explosive follow-up.

Lisa Medley said...

What a cruel cliffhanger! Gah! Nice 8 :D

Veronica Scott said...

Ooh, cliff hanger! Well done....can't wait to learn what she finds on the other side of the door. Great 8!

Karen Michelle Nutt said...

You've left us wanting more. Great 8!