Saturday, November 29, 2014

Final WeWriWa Snippet from The Cop

It's time for another WeWriWa! Today, we are doing 8 sentences from The Cop.


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This post is part of an ongoing blog hop hosted by Weekend Writing Warriors. Every Sunday, participating authors post eight sentences from a published work or even a WIP (work in progress). Then we hop to our fellow warriors’ blogs and check out all the fabulous fiction that’s happening! It's a great way to meet readers, writers, and your next favorite book!  :)

Today's WeWriWa comes from The Cop, Donna's story in the Loving Her series.

Donna White is one tough cop. Behind the badge, though, is a very sweet, sad, sensitive soul. Truly a woman alone, Donna is simply trying to navigate her way through life. Who is Donna? She is dedicated, determined, distinctive and deep. Donna’s rich and touching story is second in the Loving Her series.



Background on this snippet: Donna has just met Brynn. They are working together to find a known dangerous drug dealer. They have just raided his house and found him hiding.

“Freeze!” both women shouted. He dropped to the floor immediately. Donna and Brynn reached down, each grabbed an arm and pulled him up.

“Is this him?” Brynn asked.


Donna looked at his face. Instantly she knew. “Yes.”




Hope you liked it! Happy reading!!!


7 comments:

Catherine Winther said...

Certainly anxious to know what comes next!

Chelle Cordero said...

Wondering if he is going to go peacefully or if trouble is afoot? Great curiosity builder. Good 8.

Charmaine Gordon said...

Exciting in it's simplicity. So realistic, just cops doing their job. Well written, Lauren.

Veronica Scott said...

I'm glad they got their man! Quite an action-filled snippet, great 8!

tinachristopherauthor.com said...

Not sure if my first comment went through;).
Cool, two strong women working together. Great snippet.

caitlinsternwrites said...

Seems like he knows the drill--and he's not fighting, yet. Still, I feel like that could change...

ED Martin said...

I'm glad he surrendered so easily (so far?)